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Substance of a Lucent Dream...
Cumulative Degeneration 
11.20.08
Death
This format kicks my butt. I thought it was vignette time again, but now I'm a bit unsure.






























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:O
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T__T
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Aww....
(*twitch*twitch*)
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*shudder*twitch*
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XD

Thank you!
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oh my :O
Is there... is there any more? *.*?
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There will be.

XD
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Wait.. Why did it stop????

Poor Martel!!!!!! D:
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Because Martel needs to think about what he's going to do next? ^^
11.21.08 (UTC)
The poses are so beautiful and full of feeling, especially the last one. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of this.
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^__^ Thank you. It's somewhat disheartening that Martel is infinitely more emotional than Alyce, but oh well.

Once I figure out what the more should be, it will be.
11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, Martel! He looks so "AUGH WHAT TO DO" in that last picture.

I hope she gives him a chance; I think Martel would be a great Soccer Dad. :3
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I haven't decided what she'll do yet. Or what he'll do. T_T
11.21.08 (UTC)
awwww! That's adorable! XD
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XD

It actually made me kind of sad. I was going for something upbeat and it just kept degenerating.
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Poor little Machina is taking it about as well as Martel. He is a good guy, his criminal history aside. ;)
11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, I know - she's so attached to him. I wish I knew what she's thinking about with that teddy bear. ;)

I think that while Martel's inherently good, he has very little respect for authority and the law of government. :/
11.21.08 (UTC)
Should I feel sorry for Martel? Hmm. :|
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Well... I don't feel particularly sorry for him. Reap what you sow. :/
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She's a funny one. I swear she worships the ground he walks on and there's really no good reason for it. XD
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Oh dear. XD
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oh noes! *key dramatic music*
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Awww, the eternal question, so hard to answer!
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haha! Which part? They've got so many problems strung up in that mess. ^_~
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I couldn't help but laugh a little at poor Martel, the way he kinda stopped and thought about it, when she laid out all his faults for him. ^^;;

But this was done really well! Very interested in seeing more, oh yes. Also, I really liked how Rogue was mirroring Martel at the end there. Great posing!

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But I don't think he's thinking about the right things.

But I know I need to sit and think about what happens next.


Thanks! ♥
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FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I honestly do not know how you keep on doing this - this is brilliant!!! I love it, I'm going to go read it again right now.

One small concrit - can you give each speaker there own font/bubble/etc.?






11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, I know. I also forgot a question mark and started bolding text, what - 3 frames in? And I was lazy because it's really just for fun, but I *should* just spend the extra half-hour and make it consistent and obvious that text ourside of bubbles isn't spoken, and text inside is, but then there are bubbles vs. blocks. Yep. I got me some problems.

Should I give each one a separate font? Or I could, say, italicize Alyce. And should I use bubbles or blocks? I do need to differentiate and honestly, this one's a mess. Kind of like my brain-box.

I'm glad it somehow still manages to work.
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