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Tangible Reality
Substance of a Lucent Dream...
Cumulative Degeneration 
11.20.08
Death
This format kicks my butt. I thought it was vignette time again, but now I'm a bit unsure.






























Comments 
11.21.08 (UTC)
:O
11.21.08 (UTC)
T__T
11.21.08 (UTC)
Aww....
(*twitch*twitch*)
11.21.08 (UTC)
*shudder*twitch*
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11.21.08 (UTC)
XD

Thank you!
11.21.08 (UTC)
oh my :O
Is there... is there any more? *.*?
11.21.08 (UTC)
There will be.

XD
11.21.08 (UTC)
Wait.. Why did it stop????

Poor Martel!!!!!! D:
11.21.08 (UTC)
Because Martel needs to think about what he's going to do next? ^^
11.21.08 (UTC)
The poses are so beautiful and full of feeling, especially the last one. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of this.
11.21.08 (UTC)
^__^ Thank you. It's somewhat disheartening that Martel is infinitely more emotional than Alyce, but oh well.

Once I figure out what the more should be, it will be.
11.21.08 (UTC)
I noticed that-- she kept staring off to the side as if she were trying to avoid his eyes...
11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, Martel! He looks so "AUGH WHAT TO DO" in that last picture.

I hope she gives him a chance; I think Martel would be a great Soccer Dad. :3
11.21.08 (UTC)
I haven't decided what she'll do yet. Or what he'll do. T_T
11.21.08 (UTC)
awwww! That's adorable! XD
11.21.08 (UTC)
XD

It actually made me kind of sad. I was going for something upbeat and it just kept degenerating.
11.21.08 (UTC)
Poor little Machina is taking it about as well as Martel. He is a good guy, his criminal history aside. ;)
11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, I know - she's so attached to him. I wish I knew what she's thinking about with that teddy bear. ;)

I think that while Martel's inherently good, he has very little respect for authority and the law of government. :/
11.21.08 (UTC)
Should I feel sorry for Martel? Hmm. :|
11.21.08 (UTC)
Well... I don't feel particularly sorry for him. Reap what you sow. :/
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11.21.08 (UTC)
She's a funny one. I swear she worships the ground he walks on and there's really no good reason for it. XD
11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh dear. XD
11.21.08 (UTC)
oh noes! *key dramatic music*
11.21.08 (UTC)
Awww, the eternal question, so hard to answer!
11.21.08 (UTC)
haha! Which part? They've got so many problems strung up in that mess. ^_~
11.21.08 (UTC)
I couldn't help but laugh a little at poor Martel, the way he kinda stopped and thought about it, when she laid out all his faults for him. ^^;;

But this was done really well! Very interested in seeing more, oh yes. Also, I really liked how Rogue was mirroring Martel at the end there. Great posing!

11.21.08 (UTC)
But I don't think he's thinking about the right things.

But I know I need to sit and think about what happens next.


Thanks! ♥
11.21.08 (UTC)
FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I honestly do not know how you keep on doing this - this is brilliant!!! I love it, I'm going to go read it again right now.

One small concrit - can you give each speaker there own font/bubble/etc.?






11.21.08 (UTC)
Oh, I know. I also forgot a question mark and started bolding text, what - 3 frames in? And I was lazy because it's really just for fun, but I *should* just spend the extra half-hour and make it consistent and obvious that text ourside of bubbles isn't spoken, and text inside is, but then there are bubbles vs. blocks. Yep. I got me some problems.

Should I give each one a separate font? Or I could, say, italicize Alyce. And should I use bubbles or blocks? I do need to differentiate and honestly, this one's a mess. Kind of like my brain-box.

I'm glad it somehow still manages to work.
11.22.08 (UTC)
Oh, no. That's kind of sad. :( But I really enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out. Oh...and Martel is really hot!
11.24.08 (UTC)
I felt kind of sad making it, really. I'd intended something happier, but it just didn't turn out that way.

heehee ~ thank you.



Martel: *blushes*
11.22.08 (UTC)
damn...you are good at this.

inside the very every day ness of it...it is poetic and sad and beautiful

...are we hollow inside?

11.24.08 (UTC)
I guess I find myself most moved by stories that are grounded in reality.

I don't think we are hollow. ^_~

(and I'm not sure I think they are either.)


11.25.08 (UTC)
;___________________________________________;

*waiiiiiiii!!!*

-- A <3
11.25.08 (UTC)
T___T

I just hope the poor dears don't end up making themselves tragically miserable, though I can't imagine they would.
04.25.09 (UTC)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE HIM.

Okay, that does help. :3

POOR GUY! *hugs Martel*

GAH! <333333333333333333333333333333
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